Comments on: Avatar Narrative http://ryn7.wordpress.com/2008/03/24/avatar-narrative/ Graphic Designer Mon, 25 Aug 2008 12:46:07 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: kimberley http://ryn7.wordpress.com/2008/03/24/avatar-narrative/#comment-4 kimberley Thu, 27 Mar 2008 04:15:42 +0000 http://ryn7.wordpress.com/2008/03/24/avatar-narrative/#comment-4 Bit too much detail Ryan. This is just meant to give you an idea of the type of person they are so that you can design for them better. The lengthy historical biography is not really necessary. Better to say something like: George had a very troubled childhood and as a young adult abused drugs and alcohol, perhaps as a way to escape his terrible past. As a roadie for a few well known bands, it was always easy to get access to drugs, and drinking was just part of the territory, as was the loud music.... etc etc. Bit too much detail Ryan. This is just meant to give you an idea of the type of person they are so that you can design for them better. The lengthy historical biography is not really necessary.

Better to say something like:
George had a very troubled childhood and as a young adult abused drugs and alcohol, perhaps as a way to escape his terrible past. As a roadie for a few well known bands, it was always easy to get access to drugs, and drinking was just part of the territory, as was the loud music….

etc etc.

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